February 4th, 2004
|sisterdecadence||11:10 am - My First Offering|
It's more about setting than SEX but I get to that eventually.
He awakened on their third day in New Zealand and reached over to touch her.
Sleepily, he realized that she was no longer in their bed. She wasn't an early riser,
so where could she possibly have gone, he wondered. He then saw the note
waiting for him. He put on his glasses and read: "Make me climb a friggin
mountain, will you! For that, you must go to Nature Path #23 at noon. From
there, follow my markers. Do NOT be late! Oh, and bring a towel." Damn,
they'd had such a good time up there! Surely she wasn't really angry. It must be
a new game, he decided.
His morning was spent with breakfast, showering, the usual and at fifteen till
noon he grabbed a towel and headed off for the many nature trails they had here.
He found 23 with ease and noticed a faint arrow, marked in the dirt. This path was
at the foot of a fairly high hill and meandered along its base. Smiling to himself,
he headed down the trail, in the proper direction. Within ten minutes he'd come
to a fork in the path, and paused, looking around. There it was, another arrow in
the soft ground. Off he went, finding three more forks with marks carefully planted,
directing him to their next adventure. He puzzled along the way, pondering what
she could possibly have in store for him. As he walked, he heard a sound, growing
louder as he followed along. By now it had become quite a roar and upon turning
the last corner, he gasped and saw the end of the path. A fairly large waterfall
was pouring over the cliffside. He hadn't known what would be here as the
resulting stream went off in the opposite direction from which he'd come.
"Amazing", he breathed. But now what? He glanced around but the ground
had become rocky and there was no place for an arrow. Then he saw....close
to the falls itself he saw a mark, growing rapidly more faint in the resulting mist,
a small arrow, pointing to.....the falls? This makes no sense, he thought. Where
could she be? He walked up the slight slope to the mark, getting wetter by
the minute and looked in the direction it pointed. Wait, there, a darker spot,
off to the side and back of the falls. A bit of a shiver ran through him.
This must be the place!
He carefully stepped up to the darker area and realized as he approached
that although the water fell along solid rock, there was a space to the left of it,
barely large enough for one person to go through. He passed through and saw
it opened up into a large cavern! It fell back into darkness off to his left and it
seemed to go quite a ways back. There was another faint mark on the floor,
almost erased by the damp, that urged him forward. He walked with the falls to
his right and went through another smallish space to find...her. She was in a
tinier room than the first and was standing in another waterfall, much
smaller, that came through a wide crack off the main falls outside. She was
nude, with her head back in the water, obviously delighting in the feel of it
on her hair, her skin. It poured over her breasts and down her tummy and she
was humming something indistinguishable. He moved toward her and she
heard him, tilting her head back down to look at him. A grin spread across
her face. "Isn't this great?", she enthused. By the time he reached her he'd
gotten most of his clothes off and she stepped out of the water, to help him
remove the rest. "Look at this!" she said, and led him to a boulder off to the
edge of the secondary falls. She leaned back on it and to his delight, he saw that
if he leaned over her just right it was perfect for....oh yes, he could feel himself
harden at the thought and leaned down to kiss her. "First, put your mouth on
me," she pleaded. He obliged her and water poured down over his back, onto
her belly. It took some positioning so that the flow would not get into his mouth,
but they managed. "Ooooh, delightful, honey, yes" she started moaning softly. She was
such a verbal creature that soon her sounds were echoing off the walls. They reverberated around the room, increasing her own passion. "It
sounds like there's more people in here with us!" she laughed. After she was
satisfied with his ministrations, she turned over the boulder. "Please, do it this
way first, for a while." He looked at her and nodded and as she lay her stomach
on the rock, he thrust into her, over and over, until she was gasping and delirious.
The water fell over her back and down to his cock as they worked and something
about it seemed to drive her on to higher points. "I love the way this feels," she
purred. It seemed to go on and on, with the sounds echoing and building on one
another and she stopped at one point, to disengage, turn over onto her back and
beg him to start again. "So we can see each other," she gently smiled. He looked at
her face as he slid into her again and thought for the hundredth time how much he
liked to watch her excitement. Now the water fell on her belly pouring over them
and the boulder. They went on and on, losing all reality with the flow, the echoes,
everything visceral, palpable to them, spurring on their enjoyment of one another.
As she quivered and screamed her orgasm yet again, he thrust into her, then
pulled out and came all across her stomach, into the water. As it washed away
and they subsided, she sat up to hug him close to her. She put her mouth by
his ear and murmured, "Again, love, again."
I know it's not the more GRAPHIC stuff but I hope you guys liked it.
Current Mood: horny
Current Music: WRR - soft classical music
Thank you dear. I was hesitant to put it up as I'm shy about writing (yes, I really am shy about SOME thing! *l*) and because it wasn't "just porn", but what the hell.
very vivid and sexy sexy sexy!
Thank you too. I really wanted it to be about ALL of it...the "mystery hunt", the discovery, the feel of the water, not just fucking. I'm a tactile girl!
|Date:||February 18th, 2004 07:52 pm (UTC)|| |
quite an enjoyable passage, methinks...
Thanks muchly. I wasn't sure how well that much "story" would go over in a purely sex-related medium but people don't seem to mind. *heh*
|Date:||March 5th, 2004 10:43 am (UTC)|| |
awwww i loveeddddd it
|Date:||March 31st, 2004 09:12 pm (UTC)|| |
It was pretty good. I enjoyed it
|Date:||June 8th, 2004 02:45 pm (UTC)|| |
if you like that why don't you go to readyourmind community
|Date:||May 22nd, 2004 01:02 am (UTC)|| |
my nipples are harder than rocks
Dunno if this is of general interest
1. Have you seen those pictures of Guliver in Liliput tied to the ground by myriad minuscule ropes? Change that to 15 year old wild looking with multi-coloured dyed hair, full of attitude. With T-shirt (if you can manage to show the motto on the front its 'I'm still my Daddy's Little Darling' ) and cut off jeans almost into a crude form of hot-pants. Pulled down now with knickers to mid-thigh Tied down bum uppermost over (to Lilliputian eyes) a low hill by thousands of ropes no thicker than wool strands. Being spanked either by a gigantic (to Lilliputian scale) steam powered spanking machine run by fat old Lilliputian with a pipe in his mouth & a bored expression or by hundreds of Lilliputians each pummelling her/his marked off square (Dunno if the last idea quite works better stick to the steam spanking machine).
2. Have you seen those old 50's SUPERMAN panels where Superman via superspeed does a multi-person task all by his ownsome? If you haven't this won't mean much. Anyway they'd show him say building a wall and there'd be semitransparent figure of him mixing the mortar another of him laying the bricks another of him pointing he joints. All joined by streaks representing speed blurring. Now apply this to Superman handing out justice to a group of teenage supervillianesses. -A One-Person (virtually) simultaneous group spanking. One Spank to #1 zip to #2 grab hold one spank to her onto number #3 … onto #N and then repeat cycle for subsequent spanks. Fast enough that to human eyes Superman would be in several places at once-with a touch of speed blurring for a realistic effect. - Whacking away at multiple bums at once. I see the girls as being dressed in Standard DC Futuristic Outfit's -basically lyrex leotards (with mystic marks on their chests) and mini-skirts with plastic moulded boots.. Nice to have a mixture of blonde and dark-haired. Don't suppose you could have more than 3 or 4 or the page would get cluttered. Nice to have a variety of expressions one yelling another trying to take it with some dignity but can't help wincing, another crying her eyes out. All over his knee would be monotonous See them in a variety of undignified postures, one caught on her hands and knees, one forced against a wall with her hands held one-handedly (by Superman) twisted behind her. One held up by her legs, miniskirt (like the extremely short skirts worn by ice-skaters) draping down, looking sorta like a baby being spanked into taking its 1st breath. Don't think bare-ass is as effective here the costume is part of the effect.
3. IF CLEOPATRA'S CHARMS HAD'NT WORKED. Roman General -presumably Caesar- seated on a set of steps with Egyptian Princess (with headress etc) OTK grim faced pounding away. Cleopatra desperately trying to keep some dignity. Maybe some pillars with Hieroglyphs on them in background. Problem such princesses are usually pictured in long flowing almost skin-tight dresses slit to the knee. Would be more effective if you could show this rucked up to the waist exposing bare bum. Dunno how difficult this is to do artistically though. Don't think the obvious idea of stripping her below the waist works. She stops being an elegant princess transduced but becomes any naughty young teenager. If the rucked up idea don't work almost as good over the skirt as these sheer linen dresses were moulded to the figure and semitransparent and underwear hadn't been invented.-an almost nude effect can be achieved
4. REVENGE.2 Panels. 1st Panel on left: RED SONJA-like character stripped to the waist tied to a flogging post being whipped by soldier on her bared back. Meanwhile arrogant lady in semi-transparent harem trousers looks on barking orders, 2nd Panel RED SONJA-like character with no longer arrogant lady OTK with harem trousers down around her knees administering sanction. Lady yelling like a baby. Nice if you can pose R. SONJA so that marks of whipping on her back show.
Like fleshy rounded bums not the minimal supermodel sort. Woman's bums come in several varieties of shapes.
If you like this there is more in journal of dmsherwood53
that's a really good one, very well done. gotta love the water aspect.
Thanks, that was MY personal favorite thing about it. (Which, of course, is why it was focussed around that!) *grin*
if you smile at me with a little too much lipstick on you might just ask me my real in the morning
Not sure I understand why I'd ask you your real name in the morning, (what you mean by that) but okay. :-)
|Date:||January 11th, 2005 04:51 pm (UTC)|| |
I don't really mean anything by it just normally the people I ASSOCIATE with don't have the oppurtunity to ask my real name in the morning because I am gone it isn't a bad lifestyle it does get lonely sometimes
Oh I see! Love 'em and leave them alone kinda thing?
|Date:||January 13th, 2005 04:47 pm (UTC)|| |
not really see a friend sets up DATES for me and I meet anonymous people and we do things like fulfill their fantasies sometimes
my real NAME on the morning
RE: My First Offering
Very good story.
Re: My First Offering
Thank you for saying so! :-)
Re: My First Offering
Hope you continue to write more.
I enjoyed your story. Keep writing!
Oh, thank you. I'm really not all that often inspired but when I am again, I certainly will! :-)
I thought it was quite good. Thanks for posting!
Very nicely done! I must say that my favorite line was about the noise bouncing off the rocks to make it sound like more people were there. Very nice!
Thank you. It's really nice to hear what people liked in particular. Makes for great feedback, I appreciate it!
I live in New Zealand....damn, where is that waterfall...
*lol* I wish I knew! BTW, I love your icon. I'm definitely a dog lover, got one of my own who is my BABY!
Hey Jamie! Thank you for commenting, it's always great to hear people's opinions, but especially women's. :D